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Wednesday, July 29, 2009

FF7 Unused Text 9 - FF7の未使用テキストその9

English
日本語

Compilation: Shademp
Editing: GlitterBerri
Publish Date: July 27th, 2009

Hosted By:





Index


1. Leaving Seventh Heaven
2. Entering Honey Bee Inn Without Permission
3. Yuffie in Awe
4. Second Shinra Grunt at the Nibelheim Bridge
5. Zangan
6. The Cargo Ship's Dead Commander
7. Ride the Shinra Yacht? No.
8. Aeris Likes the Jealous Cloud
9. Cid in Nibelheim
10. MP Absorption vs. MP Absorb
11. Aeris Is Sick of This
12. Tifa in North Corel Huge Materia Mission
13. Cloud, Tifa, and Aeris in the Fort Condor Huge Materia Mission
14. What Is a Clone?
15. How Do We Save the Planet?
16. Location Names in the Menu
17. The Scrapped Sidequest
18. Fort Condor Japanese Script
19. Yuffie Gives Up the Absorb Materia... Or Not!
20. Resources

1. Leaving Seventh Heaven


Shademp says: When Tifa and Cloud are about to reminisce their promise, leaving 7th Heaven will cause an event. In the english version most of it just consists of empty dialogue boxes, except at the very end. The japanese version has text, and has been translated in the video below.


Video Link (YouTube)

2. Entering Honey Bee Inn Without Permission


Shademp says: Whether you own a Member Card or not, passing by the guard without permission and entering Honey Bee Inn will result in a weird scene. This scene only happens once and can be triggered from any door. If you stand in the upper part of the area, you will see the ghost of Cloud running from the position outside of the dressing room, with Buster sword in hand. The ghost then stops above the centre of the room, lifts his arms to his head, shakes and then disappears. Aside from all this, the script and events from here on are the same as always.

Cloud is standing still at the entrance. The background turns red in tone. The ringing sound effect and then the "Cloud's ghost" sound effect is played, like those in the "The &$#% Room".
Cloud looks around confused, turns 180 degrees, looks around, then stand stills. One of the Bee-dressed females approach him.


Bee:
"Sir......"
"Choose the BEST 'flavor' from the
4 rooms."
"But you can only choose
from an unoccupied room."

The bee walks back to the centre.

3. Yuffie in Awe


Shademp says: When seeing the impaled giant snake on your way to Mythril Mine your party members can express their feelings about this sight. Yuffie does not have any lines earlier in the story, nor in the Mythril Mine, yet she has a line here!

Yuffie:
"Geeeeez, Louise!"

4. Second Shinra Grunt at the Nibelheim Bridge


Shademp says: When Tifa is leading the party to the Nibel Reactor, at one point both Shinra grunts are visible on the screen but only one can be spoken with because the other is in your way.



5. Zangan


Shademp says: By entering the building to the left that is on fire, Zangan will comment on your presence. Even if Zangan hasn't run into the building yet, this line can be triggered. Usually the camera man (the man in white) is in the way, preventing this from happening.



6. The Cargo Ship's Dead Commander


Shademp says: Approaching this commander below the deck will usually trigger the event that leads to the Jenova battle. If this event is not triggered you can talk to the commander. The dead sure are talkative.



7. Ride the Shinra Yacht? No.


Shademp says: In the Costa del Sol harbor a sailor can be seen tending a small yacht. The game has made him unreachable, but that's nothing a few cheats can't solve! (He seems to be there throughout the whole game.)

Sailor:
"Ride the Shinra ship?
1. Yeah, I could go for that
2. Don't think I could steer it

1.
Sailor:
"Oh......is that so?"
"Yep!
Actually, we do have an old junker
we're gonna get rid of,
And I was thinking about
going into the tourist business."
"But it's probably tougher than it looks
I better think this through a little more......"

2.
Sailor:
"Yeah.
It's too much for an amateur!"



8. Aeris Likes the Jealous Cloud


Shademp says: This is one of those cases where Affection Points have an effect on the game, just like it affects who Cloud dates on Disc 1 or how it affects the dialogue between Cloud and Tifa at the end of Disc 2. This scenario requires you to have more than 120 Affection Points for Aeris when you enter Gongaga, however this is IMPOSSIBLE to get without using cheats. The underlined part is the addition, I just wanted to show it in relation to the normal answer.

When you visit Zack's parents and Aeris walks out you can talk to Aeris and get two dialogue options. Choosing "(...jealous...envious...)" with more than 120 AP (255 is the maximum) leads to this:

Aeris:
"Are you...jealous?
Hmm? Hmmm?
Are you, Cloud?"

*Cloud turns away*

Aeris:
"I'm kidding. I'm sorry."

*Aeris nods*

Aeris:
"I was hoping maybe you were..."




9. Cid in Nibelheim


Shademp says: When the party first enters Nibelheim they question Cloud's story about the village having been burnt down. At this point neither Vincent nor Cid can be in your party naturally; the game has assigned dialogue to Cid, but interestingly none to Vincent.

Scenario 1: Without Tifa in party, Cid speaks first.

Cid:
"Didn't you say that your hometown
burned down?"

Scenario 2: Without Tifa in party, Cid does not speak first.

Cid:
"Yo, Cloud.
It's not nice to lie."

Scenario 3: With Tifa in party.

Cid:
"Hey, that's different from
the one I heard!"

10. MP Absorption vs. MP Absorb


Shademp says: When Yuffie gives you the MP Absorb materia she stole earlier, there's nothing weird about the script. It simply says * Received " MP Absorb " Materia! * If you choose to leave the room before the game says you received the materia it will instead be lying on Yuffie's bed when you re-enter. Picking it up shows a script difference which is otherwise never seen. I find it interesting that the game had this scenario prepared to get the materia on her bed and not just in the sidequest's final scene.

* Received " MP Absorption " materia! *

11. Aeris Is Sick of This


Shademp says: Reviving Aeris through cheats (the ONLY way to do so) will give her dialogue in the Great Glacier. See article for more information.



12. Tifa in North Corel Huge Materia Mission


Shademp says: Tifa has two dialogue boxes for this mission (which she does not belong to according to the story). The underlined text is the hidden part.

Scenario 1: The party doesn't catch up to the train.

*Cid walks into North Corel*


Cid:
"Sorry...
I never shoulda gave that Huge Materia
to the Shinra so easily..."

Tifa:
"I wonder what Shinra wants to do
with all that Huge Materia?"


Scenario 2: The train crashes into North Corel.

*The party observes the devastation*

Cid:
"^$#@%$ !
We couldn't stop the train..."

Tifa:
"We have to do something about Shinra!
I sick of hearin'
about sad things like this!"




13. Cloud, Tifa, and Aeris in the Fort Condor Huge Materia Mission


Shademp says: Things get MUCH worse/better with the Fort Condor mission... contrary to the story, Cloud and Tifa can appear in the Huge Materia mission in Fort Condor. Aeris has some lines in there as well. They even have character animations. There could be numerous reasons as to why this is. My guess is that in earlier drafts of the game you could get or lose the Huge Materia before the main Huge Materia quest started. The normal text is underlined, while the hidden is not. The game script is copied exactly so any weird spelling or syntax are intentional (this section of the game has some really bad translations, really). Among the character lines of the optional second and third party members I only list those which have otherwise hidden text boxes.

Scenario 1a: Fort Condor win. Tifa is the leader.

*receives Huge Materia from old man*


Tifa
"This materia is really
out-of-this-world......"

Aeris
"What is this?"

(Old man)
"The truth is, this is the materia
inside the reactor."


Tifa
"If that's the case,
then you should have told us."
"There may have been
another way to fight Shinra."

(Old man)
"We weren't protectin' the reactor,
we were protectin' the condors."
"When that reactor was built,
they forced us to help.
That's how we knew what was
inside the reactor."
"I knew this day would come,
so after the Shinra left,
I sneaked in and
took the materia."
"I didn't mean to fool you, but
I guess that's how it ended up.
I'm really sorry."


Tifa
"No, I think what happened is good.
'Cause we didn't know
if we'd win."

(Old man)
"I see.
If you put it that way......
we're really grateful."


Scenario 1b: Fort Condor lose. Tifa is the leader.

*The party regains consciousness at the foot of Fort Condor*


Tifa
"Where are all the villagers?"

OPTIONAL CHARACTER LINE BEFORE OR AFTER AERIS

Aeris
"Where is everybody?"

Tifa
"I couldn't do anything.
It was just too much......"

OPTIONAL CHARACTER LINE BEFORE OR AFTER AERIS

Aeris
"...
I couldn't save anyone......"

Tifa
"Cloud......
What should I do?"

SECOND AND THIRD CHARACTER LINES

Barret
"Tifa......"

(Aeris has no line.)

Red XIII
"......"

Yuffie
"Cloud
I wonder what's going to happen."

Cait Sith
"Y'know, worryin' only tires you out.
Why don't you take it easy."

Vincent
"You've got no choice
but to take it for now."

Cid
"Oy, such a bitter pill to swallow."

Scenario 2a: Fort Condor win. Cloud is the leader.

*receives Huge Materia from old man*


Cloud
"This...is...... ."

Aeris
"What is this?"

(Old man)
"The truth is, this is the materia
inside the reactor."


Cloud
"Then you're telling me
we protected a reactor that
didn't have any materia inside?"

(Old man)
"We weren't protectin' the reactor,
we were protectin' the condors."
"When that reactor was built,
they forced us to help.
That's how we knew what was
inside the reactor."
"I knew this day would come,
so after the Shinra left,
I sneaked in and
took the materia."
"I didn't mean to fool you, but
I guess that's how it ended up.
I'm really sorry."


Cloud
"Well......
Maybe it was for the best."
"Besides, there was no guarantee
we'd defeat Shinra."

(Old man)
"I see.
If you put it that way......
we're really grateful."


Scenario 2b: Fort Condor lose. Cloud is the leader.

*The party regains consciousness at the foot of Fort Condor*


Cloud
"What happened?"

OPTIONAL CHARACTER LINE BEFORE OR AFTER AERIS

Aeris
"Where is everybody?"

Cloud
"You mean to tell me
we're the only ones who made it......!?"

OPTIONAL CHARACTER LINE BEFORE OR AFTER AERIS

Aeris
"I...
I couldn't save anyone......"

Cloud
"You mean to tell me
that's the extent of my powers?"
"So that's as good as it gets, huh?......
At this rate I'll never beat
the Shinra......let alone Sephiroth......"

SECOND AND THIRD CHARACTER LINES

Barret
"Yeah, ain't no way you gonna win."
"But if we give up now,
what's gonna happen to Fort Condor?"

Tifa
"No, Cloud.
You mustn't give up.
Survivors never give up."

Aeris
"Cloud......
You won't find the answer
by blaming yourself."
"Things are the way they are......
But you can't blame yourself
for that...right?"

Red XIII
"Don't be too hard on yourself,
Cloud.
Let's think about
what we should do now."

Yuffie
"Well, no use crying over spilled milk.
Right?"

Cait Sith
"Geez, you don't pull any punches do you?
We'll just try not to fail next time."

Vincent
"We have to fight to
avoid any more casualties."

Cid
"We'll do it next time, ok?"

Cloud
"Yeah."
"They've had their fun,
but it's over as of now!
There isn't gonna be
any more suffering."

14. What Is a Clone?


Shademp says: It explains the true meaning of being a 'Sephiroth clone'. Too bad it is never naturally triggered. BrutalAl triggered it by using a code that automatically sends you to any field in the game; this field of the Highwind deck is obviously different from the normal one you visit.



15. How Do We Save the Planet?


Shademp says: When Cid has held his convincing monologue that indeed they can save the planet but he does not know how usually the next scene is triggered by Nanaki without you doing anything. Avoiding this scene allows you to see hidden character lines. This suggests that at an earlier stage in development the next scene was to be voluntarily triggered. Yuffie does not have any lines and Vincent was not given a new one.

Barret:
"Damn, it kinda makes me sad..."

Tifa:
"Cloud......what should I do...
I've got to think."

Red XIII:
"Yes.
We have to think about what to do."

Cait Sith:
"...that ain't ta say I don't reckon what
the President's thinkin'."
"But, I can't shake th' feelin' he's
rushin' things a bit......"

Cid:
"I TOLD you I was thinkin' about it!"



16. Location Names in the Menu


Shademp says: When you enter the menu on any field you usually see a given name for that location. However, sometimes the game doesn't allow you to enter the menu; here I list those elusive location names. In some areas of the game the location bar is blank; I do not list these.

* Aeris"How cute!!" *
Location: Screen with the two baby birds on the way to/from North Corel.

* Inside the Ferris Wheel *
Location: Inside of the Gondola ride at the Gold Saucer.

* Waiting Room *
Location: Where the Chocobo jockeys wait for the next race (location of Ramuh).



* Cet Wall *
Location: Where the paralyzed remains of Nanaki's father reside. "Cet" could be a messed up attempt at romanizing "Seto", which could make this "Seto's wall".



* akao! , # Ƌ28Bdw! C *
Location: Screen where Tifa and Cloud are shown to be submerged in the lifestream.



* "A promise under a star *
Location: On and off when Tifa helps explore Cloud's consciousness in the lifestream.

17. The Scrapped Sidequest


Shademp says: Many have heard of the Key Items "Letter to Wife" and "Letter to Daughter". Involved in this was supposed to be a traveling salesman in Gongaga, parts of whose dialogue exists in the game's files though no such event can be triggered in the game itself. See article for more information.

18. Fort Condor Japanese Script


Shademp says: A strange glitch can occur when you are given the option to initiate or postpone a Fort Condor battle. Sometimes instead of English text, the game shows a short snippet of katakana characters. The nonsense characters read "dami". I have yet to see this glitch on any other version than the PAL one.



19. Yuffie Gives Up the Absorb Materia... Or Not!


Shademp says: This line isn't so much impossible as it is VERY difficult to get. If your materia list is full when Yuffie is about to give you the MP Absorb materia, she changes her mind and the materia then moves to her bed so you can take it later on. The only way to get this naturally is to grind any materia that Yuffie didn't steal from you until your materia list is maxed out. The underlined text is the normal part. Interesting to note is that if you can't take on new materia in your equipment or inventory then the stolen materia Yuffie gives back to you will simply be discarded and lost forever.

Yuffie
"Oh, all right.
Here, I'll give this to you guys."

"...No, forget it.
Besides, they have lots of materia anyway."

Yuffie
"Come on, wait---!"
"No matter what anyone says,
I'm going with you!"


The materia can now be taken from Yuffie's bed.

Received " MP Absorption " materia!

20. Resources


Shademp says: To create this compilation I used codes provided by BrutalAl that allows the player to walk through walls, move while otherwise paralyzed by dialogue boxes, change the affection points, and have any set of party members. Many discoveries would not have been made without these cheats. I also made use of the programs 7mimic and Meteor as well as the following links.

FF7Citadel

Terence Ferguson's Date Mechanics Guide

Wednesday, January 14, 2009

FF7 Unused Text - FF7 未使用のテキスト


English
日本語

This material was originally discovered by Face of the Moon's Robert Seddon. It was extracted from the Final Fantasy VII International field dialogue and offers slightly more characterization and tongue-in-cheek humor than we got to see in-game. Perhaps Square felt it was unnecessary?

1. FFVII Unused Text Part 1 - AVALANCHE
2. FFVII Unused Text Part 2 - Johnny's House
3. FFVII Unused Text Part 3 - Mount Corel
4. FFVII Unused Text Part 4 - Seventh Heaven
5. FFVII Unused Text Part 5 - Honey Bee Manor
6. FFVII Unused Text Part 6 - Mount Corel Part 2
7. FFVII Unused Text Part 7 - Riding the Midgar Railroad
8. FFVII Unused Text Part 8 - Debug Text
9. FFVII Unused Text Part 9 - Inaccessible Text

Sunday, April 20, 2008

FF7 Unused Text 7: Riding the Midgar Railroad

NEEDS:
Different picture at the top
Better headers?
Last kanji for Gekkahiro
Link to index page
More complete quotes from Robert?
Replace Robert's links with yours?
Embedded Youtube video or link to the other translation page?
Correct link to Face of the Moon?


English
日本語

Translation: GlitterBerri & Gekkahiro
Original Article: Robert Seddon
Publish Date: April 20th, 2008

Hosted By:





TIN_1


Robert Seddon says: TIN_1, the first carriage on the Midgar train (apart from the Cargo van), is the last of the regular maps with decent-sized chunks of unused text. One piece of dialogue in this file was actually moved around by the translators so that it wasn't on its own between blanked-out slots. Another point of interest in TIN_1 is {0xFEDA}『ルートマップ画面へ』{END}, which corresponds to "To the Route Map Screen" in the English files: it's placeholder text from development, and so it never appears in the game. Consequently I had to dig around in emulator memory to find out what the otherwise unseen FEDA did: it causes text to flash alternate white and grey. There's another (glitchy) code, FEE0, which causes text to scroll upwards while the confirmation button is held down; according to the Loveless.exe help file both of these are operative in the PC conversion too, even though they're not used anywhere in the final game proper. FEDF produces the same glitches but no other apparent effect. Other things I found while probing the dialogue memory: FC00 - FC18 replicate the kanji represented by FBE7 - FBFF for some reason. Elsewhere there are chunks of numbers which produce kana, but displaced downwards by several pixels (sometimes with the bottom of the character descending through the top of the line).


「こ、こわいかい?{EOL}
大丈夫だよ、ぼ、僕が君を守ってやる。{EOL}
(まいったなあ・・・こしぬけちゃったよ)」{END}
S, scared?
I'm alright, I, I'll protect you.
(I give up.. I'm a coward.) ???
「(たのむ。あっちいって){EOL}
きっと、いい人たちだよ。{EOL}
し、心配ないよ・・・たぶん」{END}
(Please, go away!)
I'm sure you're good people.
I, I'm not worried... honest.
「キャッ!!{EOL}
どうしましょう・・・。{EOL}
どうしましょう・・・・・・」{NewScreen}
(ちょっとしたスリルだわ。{EOL}
このビリビリな緊張感・・・。{EOL}
さっきの爆発事故より恐怖ね)」{END}
Eek!!
What do I do...
What do I do....
(This jittery feeling is kind of thrilling...
This is scarier than that explosion.)
「キャッ!!{EOL}
どうしましょう・・・。{EOL}
どうしましょう・・・・・・」{NewScreen}
「(あ、いんねんをつけられてるのかしら。{EOL}
からまれているのかしら・・・・・・?)」{END}
Eek!!
What do I do...
What do I do....
(I wonder if this is karma?
Maybe our fates are intertwined...?) ???

「ごめんよ・・・・・・ちょっと気分が・・・」{NewScreen}
「変なもん食ったからなあ。{EOL}
あのミッドガル名物のプレートピザ・・・」{END}
Sorry... I feel a little...
It must be something I ate.
That famous Midgar plate pizza...
Robert Seddon says: Those lines, or at least some of them, presumably belong to the Shinra manager. Below is that looks like placeholder or debug text; the two blank lines are an odd detail.

{EOL}
{EOL}
{PURPLE}ドアロックまで{END}


To the door lock. ???
ジェシー{EOL}
「ね、{Cloud}」{NewScreen}
「聞いてる?」{EOL}
☞ ああ・・・・・・{EOL}
☞ 聞いてない{END}
Jessie:
Hey, Cloud.
Are you listening?
1. Yeah...
2. Nope.
1a. {Cloud}{EOL}
「なるほど・・・・・・」{NewScreen}
「ずいぶん{EOL}
くわしいんだな」{END}
1a. Cloud:
I see...
Pretty detailed, huh.
2a. {Cloud}{EOL}
「聞いてなかった・・・」{NewScreen}
「もういちど{EOL}
聞かせてくれ」{END}
2a. Cloud:
I wasn't listening...
Let me hear it again.
1b. ジェシー{EOL}
「え!・・・・・・うん」 {NewScreen}
「あのね、アバランチの規律があって{EOL}
いろいろ暗記させられるわけ。{EOL}
いちおう、大義名分ってやつなのよ」{NewScreen}
「{Barret}がよく難しいこと言うでしょ{EOL}
魔晄の本質とかなんとか・・・」{NewScreen}
「ああいうのもね、暗記したのがついね{EOL}
でちゃうのよ」{END}{END}
1b. Jessie:
What! ...Yeah.
According to the rules of AVALANCHE we have to learn lots of things by heart. ???
Anyway, it's for a good cause.
Barret often talks about that are hard to understand.
The true nature of Mako, for example.
???
2b. ジェシー{EOL}
「はいはい。{EOL}
まっかせといて」{END}
2b. Jessie:
Alright, alright.
Leave it to me.
2c.「いい?{NewScreen}
「魔晄都市ミッド ガルは{EOL}
地上から約50Mの高さに{EOL}
建設された人工都市なの」{END}
2c. Ready?
The Mako city of Midgar is a manmade city built 50 meters above the ground.
2d. 「最高水準の技術の結晶。{EOL}
人間の知と力のしょうちょうね。{EOL}
このミッドガルは・・・」{END}
2d. It's a crystallization of the highest level of technology.
Midgar, a city symbolizing humanity's wisdom and power.
「考えてみると、あらためてすごいよね。{EOL}
神羅の技術って」{END}
Thinking about Shinra's technology, it's great all over again. ???
{Cloud}{EOL}
「神羅か・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. 神羅について聞かせてくれ{EOL}
2. 興味ないな{END}
Cloud:
Shinra, huh...
1. Let me hear about Shinra.
2. I'm not interested.
1a. ジェシー{EOL}
「え? {Cloud}{EOL}
私よりくわしいんじゃない?」{END}
1a. Huh? But Cloud, don't you know more than me?
1b. {Cloud}{EOL}
「昔のことなんか覚えちゃいない。{EOL}
俺は本社勤務じゃなかったしな」{END}
1b. Cloud:
It's been awhile.
I didn't work at headquarters or anything.
ジェシー{EOL}
「はいはい」{NewScreen}
「神羅カンパニー・・・・・・{EOL}
私たち、アバランチの目下の敵」{NewScreen}
「この列車も、この街も{EOL}
もちろん魔晄炉も・・・」{NewScreen}
「さいふからせいふまで{EOL}
すべてをしょうあくする巨大企業」{END}
Jessie:
Alright, alright.
Shinra Company...
The current enemy of AVALANCHE.
This train, this sector, and, of course, the Mako reactors...
Everything from our wallets to the government is in the grasp of this massive corporation. ???
「神羅カンパニーのトップ は{EOL}
プレジデント神羅という人物よ」{NewScreen}
「魔晄炉建設を積極的におしすすめて{EOL}
いまの神羅の地位をきずいたの」{END}
The head of Shinra Company is a man called President Shinra.
By actively pushing the construction of the Mako reactors he put Shinra where it is today. ???
私たち、無謀な戦いを挑んでるの。{EOL}
勝てるのかしら・・・・・・」{END}
We're fighting a reckless battle.
I wonder if we can win...
ジェシー{EOL}
「はいはい」{END}
Moving on.
Robert Seddon says: It's easy enough to see why that might have been deemed redundant. The following, however, is another example of Jessie's character development being cut back...

「私たち、スラムの住人が{EOL}
ミッドガルに上るには、この列車に乗るしかないの」{END}
For those of us who live in the slums, this train is the only way to reach Midgar.
「スラムの街からミッドガルへ・・・・・・{EOL}
なにもかも管理されたこの列車で{EOL}
いろんなものが運ばれていくの」{END}
From the slum towns to Midgar... ???
A lot of things are carried by this train. ???
「それにね、この列車に乗ってるとわかるの」{NewScreen}
「上の街が吸い取っていくのは{EOL}
それだけじゃない」{NewScreen}
「やさしい気持ち・・・{EOL}
ふわっとあたたかい心。{EOL}
だんだんなくなっていくの・・・」{END}
Anyway, riding this train makes you realize that those aren't the only thing the city above absorbs.
Kind feelings...
Light hearts...
They're gradually disappearing.
「そういうのって、やだな。{EOL}
だから、私、アバランチに入ったんだ」{END}
I say no way to that. ???
That's why I joined AVALANCHE.
「ごめんね、話、長くなっちゃったね。{EOL}
でも、{Cloud}に私の戦ってる理由{EOL}
知ってほしくて」{NewScreen}
「私、ただの爆弾女と思われるのって{EOL}
いやなのよ」{END}
Sorry, I didn't mean to talk for so long.
But I wanted you to know my reason for fighting.
I didn't want you to think I was just a girl who's bomb-crazy.
{EOL}
{EOL}
自主規制 {EOL}
{EOL}
{EOL}
{EOL}
{EOL}
{END}


Voluntary Restraints




Robert Seddon says: Another place where we have odd blank lines; I wonder why some of them are shorter than the full 27 characters. Presumably the text is intentionally centred; this is how it looks in a monospace font:

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Maybe it was intended as some kind of notice...


FF7 Unused Text 6: Mount Corel 2

NEEDS:
Different picture at the top
Better headers?
Last kanji for Gekkahiro
Link to index page
More complete quotes from Robert?
Replace Robert's links with yours?
Embedded Youtube video or link to the other translation page?
Correct link to Face of the Moon?


English
日本語

Translation: GlitterBerri & Gekkahiro
Original Article: Robert Seddon
Publish Date: February 4th, 2008

Hosted By:





MTCRL_3


{Barret}{EOL}
「なあ、{Cloud}・・・・・・」{END}
Barret:
Hey, Cloud...
{Cloud}{EOL}
「どうした?{EOL}
おかしな声だすなよ」{END}
Cloud:
What is it?
Don't sound so weird. ???
{Barret}{EOL}
「・・・・・・・・・・・・チッ・・・!{EOL}
なんでもねぇよ」{END}
Barret:
......Jeez...
Nevermind.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「ひそひそ・・・・・・{EOL}
({Barret}、なんだか変ね)」{END}
Tifa:
Psst...
(Something's weird about Barret.)
{Aeris}{EOL}
「ひそひそ・・・・・・{EOL}
({Barret}、元気ないね)」{END}
Aeris:
Psst...
(Barret looks kind of down.)
{Red XIII}{EOL}
「彼が物静かになるとは{EOL}
私にとっては、大いなる驚異だな」{END}
Red XIII:
It's a wonder to me to see him quiet.
{Yuffie}{EOL}
「ありゃ、トイレがまんしてんな。{EOL}
そこらへんですりゃいいのにさ」{END}
Yuffie:
Hey, I'm waiting for a toilet. ???
I could go over there, but...


FF7 Unused Text 5: Honey Bee Inn

NEEDS:
Different picture at the top
Better headers?
Last kanji for Gekkahiro
Link to index page
More complete quotes from Robert?
Replace Robert's links with yours?
Embedded Youtube video or link to the other translation page?


English
日本語

Translation: GlitterBerri & Gekkahiro
Original Article: Robert Seddon
Publish Date: February 2nd, 2008

Hosted By:





MRKT3


Robert Seddon says: Before moving on to GlitterBerri's translations, I want to note something odd about the filenames. The Honey Bee Inn has six rooms: onna_4 is the main lobby, onna_2 is the dressing room at the top, and the left and right sides each have a pair of rooms sharing a single map file (i.e. one background with the dialogue for each of two rooms): onna_5 to the right, onna_52 to the left. (The extra terminal 2 seems to suggest an alternative version of an area: cf. ealin1 and ealin12, the ground floor of Aeris's house viewed from two different camera angles.) onna_1 and onna_3? They exist on the disc, as does onna_6, but each is a mere 2KB in size and lzs.exe can't decompress them.

Other odd aspects are quite a number of blocks that don't correspond to anything found in Loveless and, for some reason, the absence of the room names familiar from the English script.

Here's mrkt3, just outside the Honey Bee Inn: the following (with the exception of one block, {AERIS} "Hey!! {CLOUD}!!") is blank in the English files. Cloud apparently believes Tifa's inside, so he can't have discovered she's in Corneo's Mansion yet.

{Aeris}{EOL}
「{Cloud}・・・・・・!! 」{NewScreen}
「ま・さ・か・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. ここは俺にまかせておけ{EOL}
2. ここに{Tifa}がいるんだ、きっと{END}
Aeris:
Cloud...!!
You've GOT to be kidding...
1. Leave this place to me.
2. Tifa's here, I'm sure of it.
{Aeris}{EOL}
「女装に必要ななにかがね。{EOL}
・・・・・・ふ~~ん」{END}
Aeris:
???
...Hmmm.
{Aeris}{EOL}
「ふ~~~ん!{EOL}
そういう態度にでますかねえ」{END}
Aeris:
Hmmm!
???

{Aeris}{EOL}
「はやかったのね、{Cloud}!{EOL}
どうだった?
よかった?」{EOL}
1. よかったよ{EOL}
2. {Tifa}はいなかった{END}
Aeris:
That was fast, Cloud!
How'd it go?
Any luck?
1. I got lucky.
2. Tifa wasn't there.
1. {Aeris}{EOL}
「あ・・・・・・!」{NewScreen}
「なんか、想像しちゃった。{EOL}
さ、いきましょ!」{END}
1. Aeris:
Oh...!
I can imagine.
Well, let's go!
2. {Aeris}{EOL}
「最初からわかってたくせに。{EOL}
ま、いいけど・・・・・・{EOL}
わたしもけっこう楽しんでるし」{END}
2. Aeris:
You knew that from the start.
Oh well...
I'm having fun too.
{Aeris}{EOL}
「それに、{Cloud}、待ってるのって{EOL}
楽しいの」{NewScreen}
「考えるんだ、いろんなこと。{EOL}
変だよね、まだ出会ったばかりなのに」{END}
Aeris:
Anyway, Cloud, waiting's fun.
I've been thinking. ???
It's weird, isn't it? We've only just met.
{Aeris}{EOL}
「うん・・・・・・。{EOL}
帰ってきて、はやく」{END}
Aeris:
Mm hmm...
Come back soon.
{Aeris}{EOL}
「満足した、もう?」{EOL}
☞ ごめんな、またせて{EOL}
☞ もうすこし、まっててくれ{END}
Aeris:
Are you satisfied yet?
1. Sorry for making you wait.
2. Just a little longer.
1. {Aeris}{EOL}
「{Cloud}!!{EOL}
やっぱり・・・・・・」{EOL}
{Tifa}を助けるためだ{EOL}
感じるんだ・・・・・・{END}
1. Aeris:
Cloud!!
Of course...
It's to help Tifa.
I feel it...
2. {Cloud}{EOL}
「{Tifa}を助けるためなんだ。{EOL}
わかってくれるよな」{END}
2. Cloud:
It's to help Tifa.
You understand, right?
{Aeris}{EOL}
「・・・・・・はいはい、いってらっしゃい。{EOL}
興味ある年ごろだもんね」{END}
Aeris:
...Alright, alright, go on.
???
{Aeris}{EOL}
「な~るほどっ!{EOL}
言いたいことはそれだけ?」{END}
Aeris:
I see how it is!
Is that all you want to say?


ONNA2


きついメイク{END}Intense Makeup
自然なメイク{END}Natural Makeup
派手なメイク{END}Flashy Makeup
Robert Seddon says: There is a smidgeon of unused text [...] which is just one indication of a more involved quest for transvestite pulchritude. Behold the untranslated text of onna_4, starting with another indication that something about the Inn's layout may have changed during development...

「ポッ・・・・・・♥{EOL}
お客さん♥」{NewScreen}
「4つのお部屋から{EOL}
好きなコースを選んでね♥」{NewScreen}
「空いてないお部屋は{EOL}
ダメなのよ♥」{END}
Oh my... ♥
Sir... ♥
We have four rooms, so pick the one you'd like. ♥
You can't choose an occupied room... ♥
「ポッ・・・・・・♥{EOL}
お客さん♥」{NewScreen}
「はやくっはやくっ♥」{END}
Oh my... ♥
Sir... ♥
Hurry, hurry... ♥
「お客さん。{EOL}
はじめてかしら?」{EOL}
1. はじめて、か・・・・・・?{EOL}
2. どうなんだ・・・・・・{END}
Sir...
Is this your first time, I wonder?
1. First time, you say...
2. I wonder...
1. {Cloud}{EOL}
「はじめてだ」{END}
1. It's my first.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「はじめてかどうかなんて{EOL}
わすれたな・・・・・・」{END}
Cloud:
I've forgotten whether it's my first or not...


1.「ああ・・・・・・」{END}1. Ah...
2.「そうだな・・・・・・」{END}2. Is that so...
「そう・・・・・・。{EOL}
5つのお部屋から{EOL}
好きなコースを選んでね♥」{NewScreen}
「空いてないお部屋は{EOL}
ダメよ♥」{EOL}
1. え・・・・・・{EOL}
2. わかった{END}
That's right...
We have five rooms, so pick the one you'd like. ♥
You can't choose an occupied room... ♥
1. Eh...
2. Understood.
Robert Seddon says: These few blocks occupy the place where the names of the rooms appear in the English files. The last version of this dialogue listed 4 rooms and said ダメなのよ instead of ダメよ. The first version also lacks the [options for] reactions; the version below has them too.

「もう!! お客さん!!{EOL}
人の話、聞いてるの?」
Excuse me, sir!!
Are you eavesdropping on people?
「・・・・・・選んでね♥」{END}...Go on and choose one. ♥
「4つのお部屋から{EOL}
好きなコースを選んでね♥」{NewScreen}
「空いてないお部屋は{EOL}
ダメよ♥」{EOL}
1. え・・・・・・{EOL}
2. わかった{END}
We have four rooms, so pick the one you'd like. ♥
You can't choose an occupied room... ♥
1. Huh...
2. Understood.
Robert Seddon says: Same as the first one, but with reactions.

お部屋を選んでね♥{EOL}
(変なお客・・・・・・。{EOL}
ま、いつものこと♥)」{END}
Go on and choose a room. ♥
(Gosh, he's so weird... but then again, they all are! ♥)
{Cloud}{EOL}
「使用中のようだな」{EOL}
1. 聞き耳をたてる{EOL}
2. のぞき見る{END}
Cloud:
Looks like it's in use.
1. I'll try and hear something.
2. I'll take a peek.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「・・・・・・すごい!!」{END}
Cloud:
...Whoa!!
「不適切な内容がふくまれているため{EOL}
残念ながら、お見せできません」{END}
This broadcast contains material which might be considered unsuitable for younger viewers. ???
{Cloud}{EOL}
「・・・・・・・・・・・・」{END}
Cloud:
......
Robert Seddon says: Now I really begin to wonder what Square's staff meetings were like.

「んっ・・・・・・?{EOL}
まだなんかあるの?{NewScreen}
「あたし、しつこい人はきらいなのよね♥」{EOL}
1. あのその・・・・・・{EOL}
2. なんでもないんだ{END}
Hmm...?
Is there something else?
I just hate stubborn people. ♥
1. Um, that is...
2. It's nothing.
1a.「なによっ!!」1a. What!!
1b.「しつこいわねっ!!」{END}1b. You sure are stubborn!!
1c.「わかったわかった・・・・・・。{EOL}
う~ん、熱意に負けたわ♥{EOL}
あなただけ、特別ね♥」{NewScreen}
「はい♥ 大事にして♥{EOL}
支配人にはないしょよ♥{EOL}
ふたりだけの秘密♥」{END}
1c. I get it, I get it...
Oo, I'm overcome by your enthusiasm. ♥
I'll do it just for you. ♥
Don't tell the manager! ♥
It's our little secret. ♥
2.「安心して、お客さん・・・・・・{EOL}
女装が趣味だってことは{EOL}
ふたりだけの秘密ね」{NewScreen}
「じゃあね♥{EOL}
バイバ~イ♥」{END}
2. Relax, sir...
It's our little secret that you like girls' clothes.
See you! ♥
Bye bye~! ♥
じゃあね♥{EOL}
バイバ~イ♥」{END}
See you! ♥
Bye bye~! ♥
{EOL} ???
『セクシーランジェリー』を手に入れた。{END}
Received "Sexy Lingerie".
{Cloud}{EOL}
「あの・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. 危険な任務のためだ。君の下着を貸してくれ{EOL}
2. ほかの言い方はないのか・・・・・・{EOL}
3. やっぱりなんでもない{END}
Cloud:
Uh...
1. Please lend me your underwear. It's for a dangerous mission.
2. Isn't there another way to say it...?
3. It's really nothing.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「その・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. 彼女へのプレゼントなんだ。君の下着を・・・{EOL}
2. うそっぽいか、ほかの言い方はないのか・・・・・・{EOL}
3. もういやだ。忘れてくれ{END}
Cloud:
Those, uh...
1. I need a present for my girlfriend. Give me your underwear...
2. It too unbelievable, isn't there another way to say it...?
3. I've had it with this. Forget I said anything.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「あの・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. なにか思い出になるものを。君の下着を・・・{EOL}
2. だめだな、ほかの言い方だな{EOL}
3. もういいんだ{END}
Cloud:
Uh...
1. I want something to remember you by. Give me your underwear...
2. This is hopeless. I need some other way to say it.
3. Forget it.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「その・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. じつは女装が趣味なんだ。君の下着が・・・・・・{EOL}
2. う~ん、ほか{EOL}
3. あきらめる{END}
Those, uh...
1. Actually, I'm into cross-dressing. Give me your underwear...
2. Oog, next...
3. I'm sick of this.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「あの・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. 俺、変態なんだ。君のにおいをかぎたい・・・{EOL}
2. いやだ、ほか{EOL}
3. バカ!{END}
Cloud:
Uh...
1. I'm a pervert. I want to take a sniff of your underwear...
2. No way, next!
3. This is stupid!
「その・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. 俺に君の下着をくれないかぁぁ!!{EOL}
2. 熱血風か・・・、ほかの言い方{EOL}
3. やめとく{END}
Those, uh...
1. Won't you give me your underwearrr!!
2. Too strong... need something else.
3. I quit.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「あの・・・・・・」{EOL}
1. 俺、君のこと好きだ。下着くれないか?{EOL}
2. ごめん、ほかないか{EOL}
3. やめ{END}
Cloud:
Uh...
1. I like you. Won't you give me your underwear?
2. Sorry, isn't there anything else?
3. I'm done.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「その・・・・・・」{EOL}
☞ 下着くれ!!{EOL}
☞ 開き直りか、ほかがいいな{EOL}
☞ やめだ{END}
Cloud:
Those, uh...
1. Please, your underwear!!
2. Too serious, something else would be good.
3. I said I'm done.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「あの・・・・・・」{EOL}
☞ 俺、病気で・・・ハァハァ。君の下着が・・・。{EOL}
☞ どんな病気だ・・・、ほかの{EOL}
☞ いかん{END}
Cloud:
Uh...
1. I'm sick... ha ha. Your underwear...
2. Sick with what...? Next.
3. Just no.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「う~ん・・・・・・{EOL}
({Tifa}を助けるために女装するとして{EOL}
使えそうなものは・・・・・・{EOL}
まさか、この蜜蜂ルックは目立ちすぎる・・・。{EOL}
う~ん、下着ぐらいか・・・・・・)」{NewScreen}
「ええ・・・・・・!! 下着ぃ?」{END}
Cloud:
Oog...
(Something I can use to cross-dress in order to save Tifa...
This Honey Bee look is way too flashy...
Ugh, the underwear, at least, might...)
Err...!! Your underwear?? ???
Robert Seddon says: Maybe if the people who want an FFVII remake ever get their wish, Square-Enix will let them play the game as it was meant to be experienced, with all these insights into social behaviour and manners restored. Finally, here's onna_52, with an extended version of the scene where Cloud loses consciousness:

「この部屋にするよ・・・・・・。{EOL}
今夜は大切な夜なんだ」{END}
I'll take this room...
Tonight's an important night.
「ソルジャーさん?{EOL}
若いのに大変なのね」{END}
You're in SOLDIER?
But you're so young, it must be hard. ???
「・・・・・・まった?」...Did you wait? ???
「ねえ、決まった?{EOL}
ここでいいのね♥」
Oh, you've decided?
This one, wasn't it. ♥
「さ♥ はじめましょ♥」{NewScreen}
「ハイ♥ まずはぁ・・・・・・。{EOL}
おふろにはいって♥」{EOL}
1. まってくれ・・・・・・{EOL}
2. え・・・・・・{END}
Well! ♥ Let's begin. ♥
OK! ♥ First of all...
Get in the bath! ♥
1. Just a minute...
2. Eh...
1. {Cloud}{EOL}
「俺、ふろには入らない主義なんだ。{EOL}
1. ふろに入るなら死んだ方がましさ{EOL}
2. 水がこわいんだ・・・・・・{END}
1. Cloud:
I'm against baths.
1. I'd rather die than take a bath.
2. I'm scared of water...
2. {Cloud}{EOL}
「わすれたな・・・{EOL}
ふろなんて何年ぶりか・・・」{NewScreen}
「安心しろ。{EOL}
下着は常に新品だ」{END}
2. ??? Cloud:
I've forgotten...
How many years has it been since I took a bath...?
Relax.
My underwear are always new.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「こまかいことは気にしない」{NewScreen}
「頭も自然に決まるしな」{END}
Cloud:
I don't worry about the little things.
I keep my hair natural too.
「なに、ばかなこといってんの?」{END}What? Are you talking about silly things? ???
「おおげさな人ね♥」{END} You tend to exaggerate, don't you. ♥
「さ♥ お客さん♥」{NewScreen}
「つべこべいわないっ♥{EOL}
ぬいで! ぬいで!」{END}
Well! ♥ Sir. ♥
I won't complain. ♥
Undress! Undress! ♥
「やだ~♥{EOL}
あせくさ~♥」
Eww~! ♥
You smell like sweat~! ♥
「ほんとにおふろ入ってないんだぁ~♥」{EOL}
1. もう何年になるか・・・・・・{EOL}
2. なれればどうってことない{END}
You really haven't been taking baths~! ♥
1. How many years, now...
2. I haven't really thought about it. ???
「いいわ♥{EOL}
ゆっくりつかってね♥」{END}
That's OK. ♥
Take your time. ♥
「でも・・・・・・{EOL}
すごいよ、においが・・・・・・」{END}
But...
You really smell...
「ゆかげんはどうかしら?」{EOL}
1. のぼせそうだな{EOL}
2. 悪くないな{END}
How's the temperature?
1. ???
2. Not bad.
1.「がまんがまん♥」{END}1. Patience, patience. ♥
2.「あら♥{EOL}
うれっし♥」{END}
2. Oh! ♥
I'm happy! ♥
「あらま♥{EOL}
お客さん、すご~いぃ♥{END}
Wow! ♥
Sir, amaziiing! ♥
「かっこいい~♥」{EOL}
1. なにいってんだ?{EOL}
2. ん・・・・・・?{END}
You're hot~! ♥
1. What are you saying?
2. Hm...?
{Cloud}{EOL}
「あ、あれ・・・・・・?{NewScreen}
「ブクブクブクブク・・・・・・」{END}
Cloud:
H, huh...
Glub glub glub glub... ???
Robert Seddon says: Cloud slips and loses consciousness.

「やだ!♥{EOL}
お客さ~ん♥{NewScreen}
「たいへ~ん!{EOL}
だれか~だれか、きて~♥」{END}
Oh no! ♥
Siiir! ♥
How awful~!
Someone~! Anyone~! ♥
「明日、旅立つ。{EOL}
危険な任務だ・・・・・・」{END}
Tomorrow I depart.
It's a dangerous mission...
「いいのかしら?{EOL}
こんなところで遊んでいて。{EOL}
ソルジャーさん」{END}
Are you sure it's okay for you to be in this sort of place, Mr. SOLDIER?
「あの子、待たしてるんでしょ?」{END}You're making that girl wait for you, right? ???
「いいさ」{NewScreen}
「正直、つきまとわれて{EOL}
迷感してるんだ・・・・・・」{END}
It's OK.
To be honest, being followed is getting annoying...
「モミモミモミ・・・{EOL}
モミモミモミモミ・・・・・・」{END}
Rub rub rub...
Rub rub rub rub....
「タントントン・・・・・・{EOL}
タントントントン・・・・・・」{END}
Chop chop chop...
Chop chop chop chop... ???
「ツンツン・・・・・・{EOL}
・・・・・・チクッン♥」{END}
???...
...??? ♥
{Cloud}{EOL}
「うっ・・・・・・{EOL}
いてっ!!」{END}
Cloud:
Oog...
Ouch!!
{Cloud}のHP/MPが回復した!{END}Cloud's HP/MP restored! ???
「キャッ! お客さ~ん!!{EOL}
たいへ~ん!{NewScreen}
「だれか~ だれか、きて~」{END}
Eeek! Siiir!
How awful~!
Someone~! Anyone~!
「ふぅ~♥{EOL}
よかったぁ♥」
Phew... ♥
What a relief. ♥
「お客さんっ♥{EOL}
びっくりさせないでよね」{END}
Sir! ♥
Don't scare me like that.
「つかれはとれたかしら?」{EOL}
1. ああ・・・・・・?{EOL}
2. うう・・・・・・?{END}
Is your sleepiness all gone?
1. Yeah...
2. Oog...
1.「んっ・・・・・・?{EOL}
まっ、いいわ♥」{END}
1. Hm...?
Oh well. ♥
1.「もう時間よっ♥{EOL}
じゃね♥」{END}
1. Time's up! ♥
See you. ♥
{Cloud}{EOL}
「そうだ!{EOL}
任務を実行しなきゃな」{END}
Cloud:
That's right!
I have to see out the mission.
Robert Seddon says: Some of the onna_4 text ("I hate stubborn people", etc.) is repeated after this. I don't know quite what to make of the revelation that Cloud keeps his hair natural.

FF7 Unused Text 4: Seventh Heaven

NEEDS:
Different picture at the top
Better headers?
Last kanji for Gekkahiro
Link to index page
More complete quotes from Robert?
Replace Robert's links with yours?
Embedded Youtube video or link to the other translation page?


English
日本語

Translation: GlitterBerri & Gekkahiro
Original Article: Robert Seddon
Publish Date: January 8th, 2008

Hosted By:





MDS7


Robert Seddon says: We begin just after the alternative version of the pre-promise scene, and as you can see this version starts off familiar but exhibits much more foreshadowing than the final script; this seems to be an emerging trend in the unused text.

『ここで回想へ{EOL}
ニブルヘルム村・旅立ち編』{END}
(Go to the flashback here.
Nibelheim Village - Setting Off)
Robert Seddon says: Placeholder text; refers to the promise flashback.

{Tifa}{EOL}
「思い出してくれたみたいね、約束」{END}
Tifa:
Looks like you remembered our promise.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「俺は英雄でも有名でもない。{EOL}
約束は・・・・・・守れない」{END}
Cloud:
I'm not a hero and I'm not famous.
I... can't keep the promise.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「でも子供のころの夢を実現したでしょ?{EOL}
ちゃんとソルジャーになったんだもの」{END}
Tifa:
But your childhood dream came true, right?
You joined SOLDIER.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「ねえ、これからどうするの?」{END}
Tifa:
So, what are you going to do now?
{Cloud}{EOL}
「・・・・・・セフィロスをさがす」{END}
Cloud:
...I'll look for Sephiroth.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「セフィロス・・・・・・生きてるの?」{END}
Tifa:
Sephiroth... is alive?
{Cloud}{EOL}
「わからない。{EOL}
もう死んでるならそれでいいさ」{NewScreen}
「でも、生きてるんだったら{EOL}
俺は・・・・・・あのときの決着を{EOL}
つけなくちゃならない」{END}
Cloud:
I don't know.
If he's dead, I'll leave it at that.
But if he's alive...
...I'll have to settle matters once and for all.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「あのとき?」{END}
Tifa:
"Settle matters"?
{Cloud}{EOL}
「5年前・・・・・・ニブルヘイム。{EOL}
俺たちの故郷をあいつは・・・・・・」{END}
Cloud:
5 years ago... Nibelheim.
Our home town, he...
{Cloud}{EOL}
「{Tifa}だってそうだろ?{EOL}
ひどい目にあったんだからな」{END}
Cloud:
Don't you feel the same, Tifa?
You went through something horrible.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「・・・・・・・・・・・・」{END}
Tifa:
......
{Tifa}{EOL}
「{Cloud}・・・・・・あのときのこと{EOL}
知ってるの?」{END}
Tifa:
Cloud... you know about what happened?
{Cloud}{EOL}
「知ってるもなにも・・・・・・よく覚えてる」{END}
I know everything... I remember it well.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「・・・・・・・・・・・・」{END}
Tifa:
......
{Cloud}{EOL}
「ん? どうした?」{END}
Cloud:
Huh? What's wrong?
{Tifa}{EOL}
「・・・・・・{Cloud}、覚えてるんだ・・・・・・」{END}
...Cloud, you remember...
{Barret}{EOL}
「おう!!{EOL}
いつまで、ごたごたやってんだ!!」{END}
Barret:
Hey!!
How long are you ???
{Tifa}{EOL}
「わかった。{EOL}
{Cloud}はセフィロスを探すのね」{END}
Tifa:
I understand.
You're going to look for Sephiroth.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「でも・・・・・・気が変わったらもどってきて」{END}
Tifa:
But... if you change your mind, come back to us.
Robert Seddon says: So that's another point at which Cloud seems to be leaving; compare Barret yelling at him to 'get the hell out' in other unused text.

MDS7 Part 2


{Barret}{EOL}
「いくぜ!!{EOL}
もたもたすんな!!」{END}
Barret:
We're headin' out!!
Move it!!
{Tifa}{EOL}
「いきましょ!」{END}
Tifa:
Let's go!
「お、おいっ!!{EOL}
どいたっ!!{EOL}
どいたっ!!」{END}
O, oi!!
???
???
「撃たれるっ!!{EOL}
撃たれるっ!!」{END}
I'm hit!!
I'm hit!!
「ゴリラ!!{EOL}
ゴリラ!!」
Gorilla!!
Gorilla!!
「ヤダッ!{EOL}
さわんないでよっ!!{EOL}
変態!!」{END}
Yuck!
Don't touch me!!
Pervert!!
「あら、いやだ!{EOL}
{Barret}が帰ってきちゃったよ。{EOL}
きっとまずいことがあるよ」{END}
Aw, no way!
Barret's back.
???
「ほら、やっぱり。{EOL}
いわんこっちゃない」{END}
Hah, I knew it.
Told ya so!
Robert Seddon says: ???

{Tifa}{EOL}
「ね、{Cloud}{EOL}
このお花、ちゃんと{MULTICOLOUR}根{MULTICOLOUR} がついてるわ。{EOL}
「枯らさないようにすれば{EOL}
ふやせるかもね!」{END}
Tifa:
Hey, Cloud!
This flower's roots are attached.
If I make sure it doesn't wilt maybe it will grow!
Robert Seddon says: From a technical point of view, the noteworthy thing about the above is that it doesn't correspond to even a blank dialogue box in the (English language) PC version's files as viewed in Loveless.exe. Maybe it isn't referenced in the game's own tables... I don't know; but the presence of such things – there seem to be quite a few in the Honey Bee Inn – doesn't make our job any easier. The use of 'Limit'-style colour-scrolling text on a single kanji is striking: why would so much emphasis be wanted? Maybe the early plans were to have less subdued formatting. We can see by comparing this in-development promotional screenshot NexuzJannis found... ??? Post-bombing talk, early version...with how the same text looks in the final game... Post-bombing talk, final version...that at some point Square clearly changed their minds about the division of text between boxes; maybe they also made other stylistic changes at the same time. (Incidentally, note that Marlene's pose is different too.) Even so, why emphasise that word? Maybe Square once planned to do more with the flower.

『ドカドカドカ!!というSEがはいるよてい』{END}("Bang bang bang!!" sound effect planned.)
Robert Seddon says: The English files have: Thudthudthud!! That ???? is supposed to come in. It now seems this refers to Barret's footfall as he charges in (reading SE as 'sound effect').

『ピンボール動く{EOL}
・・・・・・{EOL}
・・・・・・予定』{END}
(Plans for the pinball machine to move
...
...)
Robert Seddon says: This could well be another placeholder; 『』 brackets seem to be used for those elsewhere. The next couple of pieces of unused Seventh Heaven dialogue can be found in the English files, but there are a couple of points to note.

{Tifa}{EOL}
「{Cloud}! もどってくれるの?{EOL}
あ、でも、ちょっとまって」{NewScreen}
「プレジデント神羅の発表が{EOL}
ニュースで読まれるの」{END}
Tifa:
Cloud! Won't you please come back?
Oh, just a minute!
President Shinra's making a statement on the news.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「私たち・・・・・・次はソルジャーと戦うのね」{END}
Tifa:
We... we're up against SOLDIER next.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「{Cloud}、助けてくれるのね?」{EOL}
1. 約束だからな{EOL}
2. でも、{Barret}がきらい{END}
Tifa:
Cloud, you'll help us, won't you?
1. I promised, didn't I?
2. But I hate Barret.
1. {Tifa}{EOL}
「ありがとう、{Cloud}」{END}
1. Thank you, Cloud.
2a. {Tifa}{EOL}
「そんなこと言いにきたの?」{END}
2a. Tifa:
You came to tell me that?
2b. {Tifa}{EOL}
「・・・・・・悪い人じゃないわ」{END}
2b. Tifa:
...He's not a bad person.
2c. {Tifa}{EOL}
「だいじょうぶ。{EOL}
私からちゃんと話しておくから」{END}
2c. Tifa:
It's okay.
I'll talk to him.
{Tifa}{EOL}
「さあ、下へいきましょ!」{END}
Well, let's go downstairs!


??? Seddon comment?

ビックス{EOL}
「あのさ、{Cloud}!{EOL}
{Barret}は、あんなこと言ってるけど・・・」{NewScreen}
「おれたち、ほんとは不安なんだ。{EOL}
ソルジャーが出てきたら{EOL}
おれたち、みんなやられちま
Biggs:
Um, Cloud!
Barret says things like that, but...
We're really worried.
If we have to face SOLDIER we're done for.
ウェッジ{EOL}
「{Cloud}さん、手貸してくださいよ。{EOL}
俺、こわいっす」{END}
Wedge:
Cloud, please help us out.
I'm scared!
ジェシー{EOL}
「{Cloud}・・・・・・{EOL}
なんだか、せつないよ」{NewScreen}
「どうしてなの?」{END}
Jessie:
Cloud...
You seem upset.
What's wrong?
{Cloud}{EOL}
「どうなってる・・・・・・?{EOL}
やけにゆれるな・・・・・・」{END}

Cloud:
What's happening...
I'm shaking violently...
{Cloud}{EOL}
「{Tifa}・・・・・・?{EOL}
どこだ?」{END}
Cloud:
Tifa...?
Where am I?
{Cloud}{EOL}
「・・・・・・俺はどこへ向かっている・・・・・・」{END}
Cloud:
...Where am I going...
Robert Seddon says: The last line seems to correspond to …I'm going out… in the English files, which made me think Cloud was walking out of the door, or maybe blacking out (since I was thinking about how the Materia outtake starts with him slumped by the pinball machine). Reading this, however, I now suspect this is Cloud's first time on the pinball machine lift: his reaction makes it sound as though he hasn't already seen it used as a lift, which suggests a different order of events on first entering Seventh Heaven. This is all speculative, of course.

FF7 Unused Text 3: Mount Corel

NEEDS:
Different picture at the top
Better headers?
Last kanji for Gekkahiro
Link to index page


English
日本語

Translation: GlitterBerri & Gekkahiro
Original Article: Robert Seddon
Publish Date: January 28th, 2008

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MTCRL9


{Yuffie}{EOL}
「ヘンだ!!{EOL}
やってやるよ! 」{END}
Yuffie:
Weird!!
I'm gonna do it! ???
{Barret}{EOL}
「帰ってきちまったか・・・・・・」 {END}
Barret:
So, I've come back home...
{Tifa}{EOL}
「すごいながめね。{EOL}
すいこまれそう」{END}
Tifa:
What a view.
I feel like it could swallow me up.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「んっ・・・・・・ ?{EOL}
おまえがなに考えてるのか{EOL}
だいたい想像がつくな」{END}
Cloud:
Huh...
What going through your head?
I can't even guess.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「こわいか?」
Cloud:
Are you scared?
{Tifa}{EOL}
「ほんのちょっとね」{END}
Just a little.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「大丈夫だ」{EOL}
1. 俺が受けとめてやる{EOL}
2. {Tifa}なら落ちても死なないよ{END}
Cloud:
It's alright.
1. I'd catch you.
2. If you're the one falling, I don't think it'll do much damage.
1. {Tifa}{EOL}
「{Cloud}って誰にでもそういうこと{EOL}
言ってそうだよね」{END}
1. Tifa:
I bet you'd say that to anyone, Cloud.
2. {Tifa}{EOL}
「あっ、ひど ~い。{EOL}
そんなこと思ってるわけ!」{END}
2. Oh, you're horrible!
How can you think that!
{Aeris}{EOL}
「{Cloud}・・・・・・」{END}
Aeris:
Cloud...
{Aeris}{EOL}
「・・・・・・うん」 {END}
Aeris:
...Yeah.
{Cloud}{EOL}
「大丈夫だ」{EOL}
1. 俺が受けとめてやる{EOL}
2. 俺といるほうが危険だ{END}
Cloud:
It's alright.
1. I'd catch you.
2. You're in more danger being with me.
1. {Aeris}{EOL}
「きゃっ、{Cloud}。{EOL}
たのもしっ!」{END}
1. Aeris:
Oo, Cloud.
I can always count on you!
2. {Aeris}{EOL}
「それもそうかも・・・・・・」{END}
2. Aeris:
That's probably true...
{Red XIII}{EOL}
「人間とは不思議な生き物だな」{END}
Red XIII:
Humans are mysterious creatures.


FF7 Unused Text 2: Johnny's House

NEEDS:
Different picture at the top
Last kanji for Gekkahiro


English
日本語

Translation: GlitterBerri & Gekkahiro
Original Article: Robert Seddon
Publish Date: January 25th, 2008

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7MIN1


「ハッハッ・・・・・・{EOL}
あなたもテレビ見たさに我が家に?」{NewScreen}
「ハハッ・・・・・・まあ、私は家内とちがって{EOL}
ふところがタプタプですから{EOL}
まあ、ゆっくりしてってくださいよ」{END}
Haha...
You came to my house to watch TV?
Haha... I'm different from my wife,
my pockets are ???
Anyway, go ahead and relax.
「ところで、この事件」{NewScreen}
「あなたはどう思われますかな?」{EOL}
1. 実は俺が犯人だ{EOL}
2. 興味ない{END}
By the way, what do you think of this whole affair?
1. Actually, I'm one of the criminals.
2. Don't care.
「ハッハ・・・・・・ご冗談を」{NewScreen}
「いやいや、私の見解ではね。{EOL}
アバランチとやらいうテログループも{EOL}
いよいよ終わりですな」{NewScreen}
「神羅カンパニーはミッドガルの警備に{EOL}
ソルジャーの投入を決定したようですよ。{EOL}
いやはや、気の毒に」{END}
Haha... good one.
Anyhow, from my point of view those AVALANCHE terrorists are finished.
Looks like Shinra's decided to deploy SOLDIER in Midgar's defense.
Oh man, too bad for them.
Robert Seddon says: Presumably referring to President Shinra's broadcast; see below.

「これは大きな声ではいえないんですがね。{EOL}
実は私、学生のころね。{EOL}
あれでして、まあ反体制といいますか」{NewScreen}
「ハッハッ・・・・・・おはずかしい。{EOL}
かげながら、アバランチのことを{EOL}
応援してるんですよ」{END}
I can't say this too loud, but actually, when I was a student I was, one might say... anti-establishment?
Haha... I'm embarrassed.
I'm secretly cheering for AVALANCHE!


7MIN1 Part 2



「おっ!! 見えた見えた!!{EOL}
テレビは離れて見ねえとな!」{END}
「おっ!!{EOL}
ありゃ、プレジデント神羅!!{EOL}
ほう~!!」{END}
Oh!! I saw, I saw!!
Don't stand so close to the TV!
Oh!!
That's President Shinra!!
Wow!!
Robert Seddon says: Maybe this is too excitable to be one of the parents...

「おっ!{EOL}
ソルジャーが出てくるのかい!{EOL}
アバランチとやらもこれで終わりだな」{END}
Oh!
SOLDIER is coming!
AVALANCHE's finished.
「おっ!! お前は幼なじみ!{EOL}
かわいそうによ・・・・・・{EOL}
ジョニーのヤツいじけちまったぜ」{NewScreen}
「オレはここでテレビを見ながら{EOL}
世の中のことでも考えて{EOL}
気をまぎらしてんのよ」{END}
Oh! You're an old friend!
Poor me...
???
I'm distracting myself by watching TV and thinking about the times.
「フッー・・・・・・{EOL}
なんかあわただしい世の中になっちまった。{EOL}
別れの予感がするなあ」
Hum...
The world's a pretty confusing place.
I'm getting a premonition. ???
ジョニー{EOL}
「・・・・・・{Tifa} ちゃん・・・{EOL}
{Tifa}ちゃん・・・・・・」{END}
Johnny:
...Tifa...
Tifa...
ジョニー{EOL}
「ああ・・・・・・!!{EOL}
よりによって、お前にー!!{EOL}
ひどいよっ! ひどすぎるっ!」 {END}
Ah...
To you, of all things!!
It's awful! Too awful!
ジョニー{EOL}
「やめろっ!!{EOL}
やめてくれっ!!」{END}
Johnny:
Stop!!
Please, stop!!
ジョニー{EOL}
「見るなっ!{EOL}
見ないでっ!!」{END}
Johnny:
Don't look!
Don't look!!
「あら、クールな興味ない男さん!」{NewScreen}
「このテレビ、どこ製だと思います?」{EOL}
1. 神羅製かな・・・・・・{EOL}
2. ・・・・・・興味ないな{END}
Hey, Mr. Too-Cool-To-Care!
Who do you think made this TV?
1. Maybe Shinra...
2. ...Don't care.
1. 「正解~!!」{NewScreen}
「ついでに、そこの子の愛車神羅T4000も{EOL}
この家の家具もトイレのペーパーまで{EOL}
ぜ~んぶ」{NewScreen}
「便利な世の中の道具は神羅製!!」{END}
1. You got it!!
So was that kid's favorite Shinra T4000 car, while we're at it.
And all the furniture in this house. Even the toilet paper!
Everything!
All the useful things in the world are made by Shinra!!
2.「だから、わかんないのよね~」{EOL}
☞ なにが・・・・・・{EOL}
☞ ・・・・・・興味ない{END}
2. So, you don't know then.
1. Know what...?
2. ...Don't care.
1. 「アバランチってのが戦う理由よ!{EOL}
いったい、何が気に入らないのかしら?{EOL}
事情通の私にもわからないわよ」{END}
1. The reason AVALANCHE fights!
???
Even a well-informed guy like me doesn't know.
2.「あ!そ!{EOL}
なにごとにも動じないあなたって{EOL}
ちょっと素敵よ!」{END}

2. Oh! Right!
It's kinda cool how nothing gets to you.
2.「あ!そ!!{EOL}
さっすが、クールな興味ない男さん!」{END}
2. Oh! Right!
Just what I'd expect from Mr. Too-Cool-To-Care!


Final Fantasy Unused Text Part 1: AVALANCHE


English
日本語

Translation: GlitterBerri & Gekkahiro
Original Article: Robert Seddon
Publish Date: January 18th, 2008

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TIN_3


ビッグス{EOL}
「おれ、一度でいいから{EOL}
こんな格好してみたかったんだ」{END}
Biggs:
I wanted to try this look out just once.
ビッグス{EOL}
「おれ 、この服着てってもいいか?」{NewScreen}
「おれ、一度でいいから{EOL}
こんな格好してみたかったんだ」{END}
Biggs:
Can I keep wearing these?
I wanted to try this look out just once.
Robert Seddon says: This duplication doesn't occur in the English files.

{Barret}{EOL}
「よ~しっ!!{EOL}
おめえら、よくやった!」{NewScreen}
「こっからも作戦通り{EOL}
行動しろ!」{END}
Barret:
Alright!!
You guys did well.
We'll stick to the plan from here on out!
{Barret}{EOL}
「んっ~~!!」{NewScreen}
「おう!{EOL}
おめえら、休みがほしいか?」{END}
Barret:
Errrgh!!
OK!
Y'all want a vacation?
ウェッジ{EOL}
「ほ、ほしいっす!」{NewScreen}
「あっ・・・・・・。{EOL}
なんでもないっす・・・」{END}
Wedge:
Y-yes!
Um...
Nevermind...
{Barret}{EOL}
「おう!!{EOL}
おまえら、ちょっと聞いとけ!!」{NewScreen}
「このミッションが無事成功したらな。{EOL}
オレたちは身をひそませなきゃなんねえ」{END}
Barret:
OK!!
Everyone listen up!!
If this mission is a success..
We're gonna hafta hide out for awhile.
「おまえらを連れってってやるぜ!{END}I'll take y'all with me!
「アバランチの生まれ故郷。{EOL}
星の命を守るものの聖地{EOL}
コスモキャニオンへな」{END}
To the town where AVALANCHE was born.
To the sacred place of those who protect the life of the planet...
Cosmo Canyon.
アバランチの面々{EOL}
「ひゅ~!!」{END}
AVALANCHE Members:
Wow!!
ジェシー{EOL}
「温泉は?」
Jessie:
Will there be hot springs?
Robert Seddon says: Cf. another piece of unused dialogue in which she talks to Cloud about visiting hot springs.

{Barret}{EOL}
「あるかもしんねえな」{END}
Barret:
Maybe!
ビッグス{EOL}
「おれ 、この服着てってもいいか?」{NewScreen}
「おれ、一度でいいから{EOL}
こんな格好してみたかったんだ」{END}
Biggs:
Can I keep wearing these?
I wanted to try this look out just once.
Robert Seddon says: Maybe this repetitiousness arises from the scriptwriters trying out variations on the theme...

{Barret}{EOL}
「おう!{EOL}
いいかもしんねえな」{END}
Barret:
OK!
It's probably alright.
ウェッジ{EOL}
「おいしいもの{EOL}
あるっすか?」{END}
Wedge:
Will there be any good food?
{Barret}{EOL}
「あるぞ~。{EOL}
うまい酒もだっ」{END}
Barett:
You betcha.
And delicious sake, too!
{Barret}{EOL}
「ふぅっ~」{NewScreen}
「見渡すかぎりのでっけえ空に{EOL}
満天の星だ。 {END}
Barret:
Sigh...
A sky full of stars as far as the eye can see...
「遠くからチロチロと{EOL}
かがり火の音が聞こえてる。{END}
The sound of the bonfire crackling in the distance...
「そいつをさかなに{EOL}
チビチビやんのよ」{NewScreen}
「なあ、いいだろぅ?」{END}
???
Sounds great, huh?
ジェシー{EOL}
「ね、{Cloud}は? 」{END}
Jessie:
Hey, what about Cloud?
{Barret}{EOL}
「ああ・・・・・・{EOL}
あいつもいっしょだ」{END}
Barret:
Uh...
He can come, too.
ビッグス{EOL}
「でも、報酬・・・・・・{EOL}
もう払えないんだろ?」{END}
Biggs:
But his paycheck...
I thought we couldn't pay him anymore?
{Barret}{EOL}
「よけいな心配すんじゃねえ!!」 {NewScreen}
「金が払えなきゃ{EOL}
首ねっこ、ふんづかまえて{EOL}
つれてきゃいいんだ!」{END}
Barret:
Quit worryin' so much!!
If we can't pay 'im,
We'll drag 'im by the scruff of his neck!
アバランチの面々{EOL}
「ふぅ~っ!! 」{END}
AVALANCHE Members:
Wow!!
{Barret}{EOL}
「じゃな!{EOL}
あとしまつはたのんだっ!」{END}
Barret:
Alright then!
Now get in there!


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